Do these revised sentences look alright?

I’m supposed to correct them for grammar, punctuation, capitalization, number style, usage, and spelling.

1. The top five food service franchises are McDonalds, Subway, Sandwhiches & Salads, Burger King, 7-Eleven, and Dairy Queen.

3. The cooker adjusts itself automatically despite the user setting the time and temperature.

5. We rented the 8205 sq. meter building in Winnipeg’s exchange district, to many small space tenants.

7. Proper tools and modern equipment make businesses run smoother.

9. Last Fall, TiCycle installed a network to link five PC’s to its factory and retail stores.

11. In Edmonton at the Delta Residence Inn, a one bedroom suit is 130.00 a night

13. Between you and me, do you prefer a backpacking trip to the Rockies or river rafting down the Snake River?

15. The President, CEO, and three managers will tour our facilities in Nova Scotia and Newfoundland.

A few small changes. I only put the sentences on here that needed changed. The ones I omitted are fine.

1. The top five food service franchises are McDonalds, Subway Sandwhiches & Salads, Burger King, 7-Eleven and Dairy Queen.

3. The cooker adjusts itself automatically, despite the user setting the time and temperature.

5. We rented the 8205 sq. meter building in Winnipeg’s exchange district to many small space tenants.

9. Last fall, TiCycle installed a network to link five PCs to its factory and retail stores.

11. In Edmonton, at the Delta Residence Inn, a one bedroom suit is 130.00 a night

15. The President, CEO and three managers will tour our facilities in Nova Scotia and Newfoundland.

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